Okay !  Got the feedback on Balloon Pop, a couple of alterations.  One's a spoiler so you don't get to know that yet, but the other, is that he was expecting Middle school, not High school.  But having seen this he's not opposed to an older sister.

While the gamers could just as easily be middle school so no worries there.  Updates (and adaptations) soon.   Waiting on notes and a concept scene to be sent (the spoiler one).